I guess other learners here may be able to suggest sites or other sources about Hebrew syntax and word order. I can just correct your sentences
Yaakov Eckert wrote:אני רוצה ללמוד סדר נכון למילים
i.e אני גרתי בחולון. שם בשביל הכיף הייתי הולך לחוף
First thing to note is that in Hebrew, adjectives come after
the word they describe, rather than before it as in English (which we've had to learn at 4th
It would probably be better to say, "I want to learn the
correct word order", which would be translated "אני רוצה ללמוד את ה
נכון של מילים".
As for the second sentence, בשביל הכיף is a colloquial expression so it's expected you wouldn't know it. Also, we tend to say הולך לים (going to the sea) rather than לחוף in Hebrew.
Good luck with your studies and welcome!
מן המקום בו אנו צודקים לא יפרחו לעולם פרחים באביב (יהודה עמיחי)
From the place where we are in the right, flowers will never grow in the spring (Yhuda Amihay)